QUESTION AND LEARNING GOAL
Children
are natural storytellers, but most 5 year olds have very limited skills in
writing mechanics. I created Story Play Time because I wanted my students to see themselves as
authors, with rich and complex stories worth hearing and reading.
How could planning, drawing and
acting out Story Plays with a partner support my students’ oral language and
story writing skills?
My goal was for them to develop stronger narratives and
to work collaboratively in strategic
partnerships to strengthen their oral language and storytelling
skills.
My focal students were a paired, hoping their strengths would complement each
other’s challenge areas:
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Azucena, high literacy skills but often
stuck for ideas, repeated rainbows, sunshine
·
Destiny, ELL with elaborate ideas,
but little structure and often confusing stories
DATA AND INDICATORS OF SUCCESS
While Azucena and Destiny have been
creating crocodiles, castles and magic wands--experimenting with what makes a
good story--I have been collecting data:
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Product: story play
drawings and dictation
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Process: video
recordings and transcripts of their collaboration
·
Meta-cognitive: video-taped
class discussions: “Where do your stories come
from?” and "What makes a good story?" (how they think about what they
do)
I wanted to see a move from rainbows
and strings of ideas to:
·
structured narratives with beginning, middle, and end,
char, setting, problem, solution (product indicator)
·
engage in a collaborative
process in which
they share ideas, take turns, build off each other’s ideas to create a stronger story (process indicator)
HIGHLIGHTS FROM THE DATA
In early October:
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product/content:
story plan is a list of things to put
in the picture: sharks, princess, water ; dictation is confusing,
disjointed story,
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process: Destiny
dominates, not sharing or listening to
her partner, Azucena reluctant, draws but talks little; both revert back to rainstorms and
rainbows when they run into conflict or run out of ideas
This is a little shark and this is a
ocean and the princess is walking through the ocean and she says, “I don’t have
no dad or mom,” and then the shark eats the princess and there’s a sun and
there was a boat and they saved the princess. (D) This is some sun and some
ocean and these are sharks and some rain pouring down and (A) two rainbows (D).
The princess dies and after that she’s alive again because the shark spits her
out (A).
By late November:
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partnership is more collaborative with both listening
to each other talk, watching each other draw, and building off of each
other’s ideas
·
story content is stronger with
clear beginning, middle, end and elements of character, setting, problem,
solution (but still lack a depth of detail and storybook language)
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Azucena
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Destiny
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Notes
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PLAN
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There was a fire and this fairy appeared and washed it
out.
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Azucena began with a problem that
got quickly solved
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There was a boy, and then the boy died of Kindergarten [?]
and the name was Ravin and that was cool... and then they taked them to the
police. I mean to the fire station. And there was a fairy inside and then
sh-- and then they magic-ed him to do--back into a people, right?
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Destiny built upon the fairy and
fire elements of Azucena's plan and elaborated on the problem with a new
character, Ravin
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DRAW
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There was a fire station and there was a boy and there was
a police and the boy got lost.
And then the fireman found the boy [?] (and this whole
big--) and then the boy was alive.
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Azucena drew the characters and
setting Destiny had planned. Destiny watched Azucena drawing the fire
station and a sun and began to tell the story, with the added detail of
the boy getting lost.
She continued narrating
as Azucena drew the boy and the fireman.
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DICTATE
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This little boy goes in lava. There's a person named Ravin
and there's these firemens and this little boy dies. But then this fairy
comes and he makes the boy back into a person. That's all.
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Azucena’s original plan was a fire
washed out by a fairy, but her final dictation includes Destiny’s ideas about character Ravin who dies in the
fire and is brought back to life by the fairy.
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FINAL
THOUGHTS
When someone comes into a Kindergarten classroom and sees children “just drawing pictures” or “just talking and playing around,” this data shows that they are actually engaged in meaningful learning.
Through Story Plays--when they have
opportunities to work with a partner, talk and draw together, then see their
story play acted out--they are exploring and experimenting with what
makes a good story and developing important oral language skills that are
the foundation for reading and writing.

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